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Daily Drawing Challenge sketch

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Excellent choice to leave the distant limbs as shaded silhouettes.  Her body pose shows well the movement of being thrown forward, as if by a blast...especially in her toes and fingers.  I see two areas for possible improvement though, if I may so say, my friend.  While her head is angled well, her neck is more vertical than I would have expected from a force acting upon her.  I'd have thought to see the weight of her cranium having pulled her neck back as if a single arc could trace the curve of her back and neck, concave to the source of the blast.  Second, her breasts look as if they've been thrown forward with greater force than that which propels the rest of her body.  They're leading the motion, rather than being pulled along.  I believe the movement of her torso would precede that of her breasts and the inertia of the latter would make them somewhat flatten against her chest and roll to the sides as her body tries to fly through or between them and they get dragged along.  Does that make any sense?

I'm under the impression that this is the sort of feedback you desire.  Please let me know either here, or by email, whether this is okay or not; and I'll know whether to continue with other pieces or not.  I also welcome your input on my work.

Take care, brother.  I'll hope to see you soon.